WALT: create a show don't tell .

The nice cold grass and getting pulled down the hill.I am getting pushed over the Mokoroa 

and getting splashed in the water and the mud. I got the water sprayed in my eyes . I got run over by greedy people and got tripped over the twigs and branches and almost out of breath and tired and felt puffed out and the wind whipped my leg of and then my legs felt sleepy. 

the end

by Shania