Walt: show story not tell

The freezing air that's chilling my head.

the heated water that warming my feet.

 life gards are 

  people are hurting my ears by screaming.

Mums hurting your eyes by flashing there flashlight on there phone to take a picture of you jumping scary rides and nice hot spa pools.

WALT: STORY NOT TELL

when i went to the drum show i felt very embarrass because there was heaps and heaps of people there then my and my friend sat down then i saw Mr Chattfield videoing my and my friend playing the drums then i started to wonder whats that that making my hand saw then i looked at my hands it was all red because i was banging the drums to hard then me and my friend were laughing at the beard man because he was singing so powerful







the end
by shania

My beautiful work

Fair trade

The earth map

What's about fair trade

WALT: create a show don't tell .

The nice cold grass and getting pulled down the hill.I am getting pushed over the Mokoroa 

and getting splashed in the water and the mud. I got the water sprayed in my eyes . I got run over by greedy people and got tripped over the twigs and branches and almost out of breath and tired and felt puffed out and the wind whipped my leg of and then my legs felt sleepy. 

the end

by Shania  

My discribeing lorax

My all about lorax speech bubble

Ask a character of your choice for 6 key words which would tell you more about them

Samoa

The School Pepeha

Here is Shania with a friend signing the school Pepeha.
The Pepeha in the picture was created in class with Ms Stanley.

The Clever Gribbles, by Joy Cowley, read by Shania.

Sprinkle here a sprinkle there

Shania photo babble