Thursday, May 21, 2015

WALT: STORY NOT TELL

when i went to the drum show i felt very embarrass because there was heaps and heaps of people there then my and my friend sat down then i saw Mr Chattfield videoing my and my friend playing the drums then i started to wonder whats that that making my hand saw then i looked at my hands it was all red because i was banging the drums to hard then me and my friend were laughing at the beard man because he was singing so powerful







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by shania

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  1. wow the writing is awesome and i like how you put them in paragraph

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